Wah, your story is so CUTE! i really liked the dialogues, they feel so real, you know? And the facial expressions too! It's all full of feelinngs and emotion! I expect great thing from your match plots! And, from that little drawing of Zin throwing an anvil, I guess I can expect great battles too!!!
Best of luck with your round one comic!
Your intro comic was a hoot also! Good luck with your battle
Your character's design is pretty awesome, too. Looking forward to seeing her in action!
so awesome <3