Wah, your story is so CUTE! i really liked the dialogues, they feel so real, you know? And the facial expressions too! It's all full of feelinngs and emotion! I expect great thing from your match plots! And, from that little drawing of Zin throwing an anvil, I guess I can expect great battles too!!!
This is turning out marvelously fun so far!!! Love the characters, the interaction, and the play with the NPCs. Not a lot of people did that, and you were by far the most successful. I'm liking the soft greyscale, too. It plays well with your style!! Good luck!!!
Heh, nice ending ^^ Panel design works well in the whole comic, as well as the setting and colours ^^ Heh, must say that Zin's innocent-like "Where should I put this?" and the expressions of others (Silas especially) really made me grin X3 Great job ^^